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    Default Hot piece of class

    heres a piece of a classical sounding song im working on. and another clever (imo) post title!

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    Flat, Let me preface this with saying that I have said that I like what I have heard you post and that you are very proficient in technical playing.....this piece to me really sounds more like a sweeping exercise than actual music.

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    Sounds good...but I would like to hear it dirty too.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Fishhead785 View Post
    Flat, Let me preface this with saying that I have said that I like what I have heard you post and that you are very proficient in technical playing.....this piece to me really sounds more like a sweeping exercise than actual music.
    HA! but i just down pick fast and its not swept!
    at least not all of it!

    I know it seems like an exercise but hopefully when im done it wont. thats what id like at least. I know for the video im just using a lot of arpeggios and the last ones really are an exercise i do, but they are semi-outlining what i intend on playing. The beginning arpeggios are staying as well as the second set that arent a sweep pattern but afterwards i intend on something different its just that i dont know what...pedal point? its gonna be in there somewhere i feel. Maybe a bit of inspiration is needed. maybe some suggestion as well to help me not sound like an arpeggio machine?
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    Quote Originally Posted by amerturk View Post
    Sounds good...but I would like to hear it dirty too.
    you got it! tomorrow ill rercord it with some distortion
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    Maybe it just needs some really cool backing rhythm. The first verse is a little repetitive....I lke the bridge which I believe was an ascending diminished thing. And for the record if you are playing an arpeggio with all downstrokes that is a sweep....lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by Fishhead785 View Post
    Maybe it just needs some really cool backing rhythm. The first verse is a little repetitive....I lke the bridge which I believe was an ascending diminished thing. And for the record if you are playing an arpeggio with all downstrokes that is a sweep....lol
    but they arent a single downstroke its many of them
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    a sweep is a sweep is a sweep......now shut up and play

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